Honest Feedback Requested: Lithl - Swarm of Sound

Lithl - Swarm of Sound

I would appreciate any kind of feedback, whether it’s a critique or just your overall impressions of the work.

Thank you.

Edited Wednesday at 07:08 AM5 days by Lithl

|Question |..... Whats the difference between " MUSIC vs NOISE " ?.....Is it possible to convert NOISE into MUSIC ?

Your Sounds might be classed as : SFX | SOUND EFFECTS

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Edited May 9May 9 by interlect

3 hours ago, interlect said:

|Question |..... Whats the difference between " MUSIC vs NOISE " ?.....Is it possible to convert NOISE into MUSIC ?

Your Sounds might be classed as : SFX | SOUND EFFECTS

Thank you for your reply and honest thoughts.

-Regarding your question

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Edited 12 hours ago12 hr by Lithl

This is just my Opinion......you don't have to agree with it............But maybe its best to base opinions on fact not fiction.

GENRE | Music can be classified into GENRE | Disco-Rock-Classical-Folk : - what GENRE is your composition ?

CATEGORIES | This concept identifies the difference between an "Apple from an Animal"........Music from Noise.

Edited May 9May 9 by interlect

48 minutes ago, interlect said:

This is just my Opinion......you don't have to agree with it............But maybe its best to base opinions on fact not fiction.

GENRE | Music can be classified into GENRE | Disco-Rock-Classical-Folk : - what GENRE is your composition ?

CATEGORIES | This concept identifies the difference between an "Apple from an Animal"........Music from Noise.

Oh yeah, I think you are right. Thank you for teaching me.

Edited May 9May 9 by Lithl

On 5/8/2026 at 12:18 PM, Lithl said:

it was created primarily out of curiosity—specifically to see what would happen when stacking polyrhythms in polytempo based on my initial imagery. 

Hi Lithl, welcome to the forums!

As an experiment, I'm sure it's been entertaining and enriching for you. For me, the result is just a noise crescendo, I don't find it interesting at all. The processes that lead to it may be, though.

On 5/8/2026 at 12:18 PM, Lithl said:

I am left wondering if this rejection proves that I lack talent or that I am merely producing self-indulgent noise that provides no value to the listener

I don't think that what you did proves or disproves that you lack talent. From this alone it's impossible to tell. Talent for what exactly, though? What are you pursuing? Are the other contestants' works similar to yours? How important is it to you to provide value to the listener?


Best regards,
Daniel–Ø.

1 hour ago, Omicronrg9 said:

Hi Lithl, welcome to the forums!

As an experiment, I'm sure it's been entertaining and enriching for you. For me, the result is just a noise crescendo, I don't find it interesting at all. The processes that lead to it may be, though.

I don't think that what you did proves or disproves that you lack talent. From this alone it's impossible to tell. Talent for what exactly, though? What are you pursuing? Are the other contestants' works similar to yours? How important is it to you to provide value to the listener?


Best regards,
Daniel–Ø.

Thank you for your honest opinion. That is exactly what I wanted to hear.

To me, if a piece is not found "interesting," it means it is no different from a mere mess—it is not a work that holds value for others.

When I create a work, I don't necessarily have the conscious intent of making it for someone else; rather, I make it because it's fun, and I am satisfied with that aspect. However, I feel that can sometimes turn into a sort of self-indulgence.

What I am clearly seeking is to create something that others find highly creative and stimulating. For example, Edgard Varèse’s Poème électronique is a work of so-called "noise," yet it is stimulating and incredibly imaginative to listen to. 

(Of course, I don't think for a moment that I belong in their lineage, but that is exactly what I am aiming for.)

I believe I can only take pride in having created a "great" work—moving beyond simple self-satisfaction—when it possesses the kind of value that makes others feel it is worth listening to.

In other words, I am talking about that specific talent. Even if I can create something I find interesting, if it holds no value for others, I feel I lack the talent—or perhaps the ability—to present that value.

Of course, I don't think anyone's talent can be fully determined by a single work, but I simply wanted to ask as a point of reference. At least with this piece, I wasn't able to provide any value to the listener; therefore, I suppose it can be classified as a work of self-indulgence. Regardless, your perspective was extremely helpful! Thank you for your valuable input.

14 minutes ago, Lithl said:

Edgard Varèse’s Poème électronique

Just had a listen to it. I'm not sure if it's stimulating but I found it funny (in the good way) at times. I can get why it's called "noise": the piece ended, and youtube directly put "Studie 1" from Stockhausen next. I couldn't have told that it was a diferent piece if they were both presented in the same mp3.

16 minutes ago, Lithl said:

I feel I lack the talent—or perhaps the ability—to present that value

I would say this is a matter of finding your public. Value is relative, and subjective. There's always a non-zero chance that some may find your work (the one you submitted) interesting or even beautiful. In fact, you can prove this yourself by making something you may find most terrible and sharing it. Sooner or later, someone may appear and praise it.

Keep following the path you like.
Kind regards!