Friday at 05:22 PM1 day Hey there!I am new to this forum and would like to present my piano ballad (version 86).It was critized strongly in another forum, mainly because of the piano melody. The piece isn't completed in full. From 1:53 on the dynamics of the topline strings aren't edited yet. Because of the many critics I composed 3 new piano melodys (version 90,96,101).What is your hearing impression? How do you find the 3 melodys? Piano Ballade_86.mp3 Piano Ballade_90.mp3 Piano Ballade_96.mp3 Piano Ballade_101.mp3
1 hour ago1 hr Could you tell me, for example, what kind of criticisms you received?Personally, I think it’s good overall!! If I had to point something out, I’d say the melodic phrasing feels a bit similar throughout, which makes the development feel a little thin. Among the new melodies, I really like measure 90. Personally, I thought it might be interesting to try swapping the left-hand accompaniment of 90 with something like what's in measure 96!By the way, if you don't mind, could you tell me the name of that forum? I’d love to take a look myself.
11 minutes ago11 min Author 1 hour ago, Nd-6829 said:Could you tell me, for example, what kind of criticisms you received?Personally, I think it’s good overall!! If I had to point something out, I’d say the melodic phrasing feels a bit similar throughout, which makes the development feel a little thin. Among the new melodies, I really like measure 90. Personally, I thought it might be interesting to try swapping the left-hand accompaniment of 90 with something like what's in measure 96!By the way, if you don't mind, could you tell me the name of that forum? I’d love to take a look myself.It's a German forum. They said things like:"There is no melody." "That's just tinkling." "I can't sing to this melody."
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