June 1Jun 1 Author 3 hours ago, interlect said:A little Feedback on Melody lines :What about my music, man. I don't need you lecturing me about what melody is or not.
June 1Jun 1 Author 3 hours ago, interlect said:Oh You want feedback on your MUSIC ?.....................I would start with the Science of a Melody.............that will help you make MUSIChttps://www.science.org/doi/10.1126/sciadv.adk0010That's sounds like an envy
Saturday at 08:03 AM2 days I've just seen this come across my feed, tonight. Sorry I didn't see it sooner, @D.V.Vanin. After skimming through your works posted here, I'd like to make a suggestion...Before writing a melody, or making an attempt at one even, why not try to establish a key & a mode that you'd like to use for it first? Then establish a chord progression, and then create a melodic line to drive it forward... What you have written here feels more randomized, atonal, and unorthodox, if I'm being brutally honest. I'd enjoy to hear what you come up with, having made those procedural changes. Keep trying and keep practicing!-Unc
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