June 13Jun 13 Hello everyone, I'm back, this is my new piece in Japanese style, hope you like it.the video: https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1c3EQ6aE9k/?vd_source=95e0ca6d098d75738c935e50eaa3ac41 Op.8 Nr.2.mp3
June 25Jun 25 Hi, cloud10000.I think this piece of yours is well-structured and very good. In particular, I felt that it is not completely in a traditional Japanese music style, but rather blended with Western music, so to speak. Creating a smooth blend of different genres is difficult, so I think it is wonderful. Since I feel this style is not very common (or maybe I just don't know many examples, so if you know of any, I'd appreciate it if you could share them with me.), a piece like this is stimulating and intriguing.On the other hand, a few parts caught my attention. First of all, the clipping. I noticed it especially around 0:48 and 3:00. Related to that, I also felt the volume of the flute at 1:46 was a bit too loud and hard to listen to. Additionally, the vocal part at 1:33 felt a bit out of place, including the timing of the performance. This is probably because it feels like a preset pasted directly in the DAW. While it might be unavoidable, I thought that if these points were improved, it would turn out to be an even more appealing piece. This is just my personal opinion, though.Best,Lithl. Edited June 25Jun 25 by Lithl
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