June 13Jun 13 Hello everyone, I'm back, this is my new piece in Japanese style, hope you like it.the video: https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1c3EQ6aE9k/?vd_source=95e0ca6d098d75738c935e50eaa3ac41 Op.8 Nr.2.mp3
1 hour ago1 hr Hi, cloud10000.I think this piece of yours is well-structured and very good. In particular, I felt that it is not completely in a traditional Japanese music style, but rather blended with Western music, so to speak. Creating a smooth blend of different genres is difficult, so I think it is wonderful. Since I feel this style is not very common (or maybe I just don't know many examples, so if you know of any, I'd appreciate it if you could share them with me.), a piece like this is stimulating and intriguing.On the other hand, a few parts caught my attention. First of all, the clipping. I noticed it especially around 0:48 and 3:00. Related to that, I also felt the volume of the flute at 1:46 was a bit too loud and hard to listen to. Additionally, the vocal part at 1:33 felt a bit out of place, including the timing of the performance. This is probably because it feels like a preset pasted directly in the DAW. While it might be unavoidable, I thought that if these points were improved, it would turn out to be an even more appealing piece. This is just my personal opinion, though.Best,Lithl. Edited 1 hour ago1 hr by Lithl
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