July 4Jul 4 I'v been revising this piece yet again.This time I focused on a more rewritten exposition like introduction that is connected to the material later and tried to make it more cohesive overall.Any feedback is welcome.Thanks in advance. War born draft 5 04-07-2026 - Flow 1.mp3 war born draft5 score.pdf
July 4Jul 4 Hi, Bjarke. It's a really energetic piece. I feel a vibe close to Peter Bence.The flowing feel is good.However, I felt it's a bit cluttered. If you add more extreme dynamics to each section, it might resolve that issue and make it even better. I think the piece itself is good, though!Best,Lithl. Edited July 5Jul 5 by Lithl
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