The Revised Fantasia!"

I tried to change a lot in the piece. I rewrote the accompaniment almost entirely. Then I tried to suppress the folk-like sound of the repeating melody and turn it into something more melancholic. I am uncertain if this notation is suitable for piano performance, as I do not play the piano myself; otherwise, it would need to be adapted.

revised Fantasia.pdf

Hello! On first glance at the score, no, it is not suitable for piano performance. Mainly caused by the page layout and measure size. Below, I have attached some annotations for you and a separate PDF of what is normal to see for a pianist. (Girl with a Flaxen Hair by C. Debussy)

Photo.pdf Tristan - Revised Fantasie [ANNOTATED].pdf

Hello M.K Piano,

Thank you very much for the constructive feedback. I have tried to correct the score accordingly. Unfortunately, I was unable to successfully shorten the final bar. I must admit that some of these errors arise repeatedly because of the formatting, such as the incorrect ties on the pedal point. Thanks again.

Fantasia with a change of mood new version .pdf

6 hours ago, Tristan25 said:

Hello M.K Piano,

Thank you very much for the constructive feedback. I have tried to correct the score accordingly. Unfortunately, I was unable to successfully shorten the final bar. I must admit that some of these errors arise repeatedly because of the formatting, such as the incorrect ties on the pedal point. Thanks again.

You’re welcome! Depending on the notation software you are using, there should be ways to get rid of excess measures or bound measures to a system.

I had to spend some time on my own with my software just reading the handbook or shortcuts for this stuff lol