19 hours ago19 hr I’ve named this piece "A Wistful Waltz in Cheerful A Major." Perhaps you could offer some advice on how to improve it.A Wistful Waltz in Cheerful A Major5.pdfA Wistful Waltz in Cheerful A Major5.mp3
6 hours ago6 hr Hi @Tristan25 !12 hours ago, Tristan25 said:Perhaps you could offer some advice on how to improve it.I think first some of the harmony are not matching with the melody, for example the last 2 beats of b.18-21. B.22-25's last 2 beats are better because there are resolutions to the suspension in the 3rd beat. Another aspect is variation. I think you can definitely add a contrasting section in a different key in the middle, since here it's predominiantly A major with not so much harmonic and modal contrast. Thx for sharing.Henry
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