Short etude for harpsichord

Hi,

I present to you my new piece - short (1 min) etude for harpsichord (a little break after my last quite long cantata :) ).

As always, advices for future or this piece are welcomed.

Etiuda.pdf

Edited 8 hours ago8 hr by Josquins turban

Hi, welcome to the Forum!
Not only as a composer, but as a harpsichordist, I find that there is too much of the same for too long. Essentially, a lot of repetition and not enough imitation/ independence. However, before I go on to elaborate, was it your intention to imitate baroque style?

Maybe a little bit yes, I think most of what I write imitate or tries to imitate baroque style, even if I don't really intend it 😆. I didn't really knew how to write something longer/with less repetition on so short "theme", that was I think main problem here...

If you could write, what could be done to achieve this, it would be very nice :)