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UNSELF — Three Knocks [melodic metalcore / emotional post-hardcore, Suno] — feedback on lyrics and chorus

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Hello Young Composers,

I am sharing Three Knocks by UNSELF, my independent musical project in melodic metalcore / emotional post-hardcore.

I write the lyrics myself and define the musical direction. Suno is used to generate the music and vocals.

Listen: https://too.fm/or4r4rb

I would appreciate honest, specific feedback on the lyrics, whether the chorus is memorable, how convincingly the vocals communicate the words, and the overall sound. If you think a section loses momentum or the vocal delivery does not work, please point to the moment and explain why. Constructive criticism is welcome.

Thank you for taking the time to listen.

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