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Hi everyone, a piece for flute , two violin and violoncello i composed it on 10th and 11th November hope you like it thanks for your time samsun1919.mid samsun1919.sib

a good starting for first movement but as a listener (my harmony knowledge is very limited) i think the feeling you want to give is missing, passion, love,hate, hunger... i dont know what's in your mind ;) ( i quess its romance but its my perception) the intro is sounds good..until 18th measure it goes well i like the change and mood in 30-36 measures and my favorite part is outro ( the last 4 measures) anyway these are my ideas as a listener i hope they help

its annoying its disturbing and i loved it :D the introduction is my favorite its like a tensed conversation... "ellerine sağlık"

a ball saloon full of peopledancing and laughing and having fun in their 19th century fashioned clothes :) i love it short and sweet :D

hi everyone I met and joined this site today and this is my first post A 2 min. piece for flute and cello i composed it a few months ago the idea in my mind is two lovers talking without words. i am new in composing so there might be ( must be:D ) technical mistakes and missing things. thus your comments and critiques are welcome i hope you like it... TwoLoverSoul.sib