well it basically is finished - the absolute final version isn't much different at all - the cello however was mainly just added to make the piece sound fuller - so it's not suppose to move around much.
Thanks for your comments, though. I really enjoy hearing others opinions.
This is a piece I was comissioned to write - I dedicated it to a good friend of mine. Thought I'd share it here. Enjoy! (scroll down and click the "Download Now!" image to download the .mp3
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P.S.- this isn't the absolute final copy - but it'll do - the final isn't much different at all. Feel free to comment.