Bonus Vir

Thank you all for your comments ! I really appreciate them, like I said I'm kinda beginning there's still much to improve. I've been studying composition officially since a year and a half ago, but I've been dabbling in composition since I began taking piano lessons at the time I was about 10 years old. I used finale 2014, but the piano sound is actually a pianoteq demo version. The music font is Gutenberg for finale, I found it for free on elbsound.studio, and the text font I think Strassburg Fraktur on dafont, also free. Used it because it was a gift and I wanted the score to look more gift-like(?) xP Thanks especially maestrowick for your suggestions 2) yes, I see how a quintuplet would feel more natural. 3) you're right, I'm not sure about the repeating d's in m. 5, but I can't seem to come up with a better idea. 4)This, I don't know what you mean could you clarify ? 5) yes, subito f 6) good idea ! 7) you're right also Although I don't see myself necessarily expanding the piece, I'll surely fix some of the things pointed out. But I'm definitely posting soon when I finish a new piece, thanks aagain for your comments finding out about this forum has been amazing

Hi, my name is Ramón E. and I'm a beginner composer, also new to this forum. This is a short piece I wrote for a friend back in November, I want to know what you guys think.