Yeah, although remember this is my first composition. I understand I have a lot to learn which is why I want to study composition at a University level. So without too much negativity, constructively tell me what I should do to improve it!
Hello, I'm new to this site. I only got into music about 3 years ago (I'm 19 now) and I need help because this is my first composition. So I understand most musical jargon, but I'm wanting to study Composition next year at a Music Conservatorium. Constructive feedback would be awesome! I know the piece isn't perfect which is why I need help!