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Back after a while and a holiday. I've worked more on my composition. I'm a lot happier with this one, could definitely do with some more work and more dynamics but I still like it. Thoughts?

@Rabbival507 Does this work??

@Rabbival507 Hey, thanks for the feedback! This isn't actually my first composition, I've been doing the occasional one amongst songwriting for a good few years now. But only now starting to take it seriously - it's why I joined! And it's Agent P because I just really like Phineas and Ferb. I think I agree on the memorability of it. There were a few little ideas that I liked but I wasn't sure which one to use so I just threw them all in XD But I tried re-jigging it now. Thanks for the feedback again! :)

I really like this! It sounds so cool and majestic! It really suits a fantastical setting. I like the intro and I think you're almost there with it. Just a question, the 2nd theme starts at bar 14 right? Either ways for dynamics, I think the bit you have as f works really well but in those empty bars at 23, to contrast, you could have a p section with a less polarising texture, and then jump back into the big stuff. When it comes to dynamics, I personally try to go for what I want the players/audience to be feeling and just what feels natural. If nothing other than forte feels natural, then it's probably meant to be forte :)

Hey, I just signed up to this so forgive me if I'm doing this wrong! I just want to improve my compositional skills and thought this'd be a good place to start? I wrote a piece yesterday for viola and piano. I'm not too sure what I need to do with it now. I don't think it's finished but I don't know what's wrong with it. I'd love some critique! 🙂 Link: