cello-fellow

I agree with Zoe.

All I have to say is tremolo is better used in larger scale works.

Well I'm a bassoonist so I'll analyze the bassoon part. After seeing the score I didn't see anything that hard. It never went that high or low.

Ok. This is nice. I wouldn't exactly put it on my iPod though. First off Oboe Tuba Timpani Piano and Strings is odd instrumentation. You're the composer. You can choose how to dothe instrumentation. But I would reccomend using the standard chamber orchestra: Oboe Bassoon Horn Strings.

But my favorite work of yours would have to be the Bassoon Concerto in Bb with that Mozartean style.

Nice. I would reccomend doing variations on the main theme rather than repeating it so much.

Ok. I'll make the middle one and finale longer. I tend to make my finales the longest.

Ok. Most of my stuff isn't more than 5 minutes...

It's a good start! Keep working to refine this!

Oh. I see what you mean. But yeah. Learning a string isn't that important in my opinon. I do play cello though. But the winds have so many effects playing bassoon has helped me write wind parts better. Some cool wind effects are multiphonics etc.

Um... What do you think? BTW there is a DC Al Fine at the end and ends on that fermata chord.

Ok. Now I know how. Lol.

How can music be sexual?

Nice.

That is very nice. I don't have any comments. Nice and modern sounding!