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After getting some feedback about the somewhat abrupt ending, I had some time to tinker this weekend and added an additional bar to the ending: Audio: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1BPWTEZsWXrk7BhoJQTYbMbaZedXNVHDY/view?usp=sharing Score: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1VLEvAk5pc4gj1mCHCv2kP3e1SR7sNam6/view?usp=sharing I think it takes away a tiny bit of the "ending on with a cliffhanger" that I like, but at the same time, I don't think it sounds as abrupt. But perhaps it's a bit obvious? Thanks! David

Does it “work” in your opinion? Agreed it is weak / open from a theory / cadence perspective.

Yes, thanks. Some folks found the ending abrupt / jarring and was wondering if that opinion was shared. I rather like the unexpected ending as it kind of keeps in the theme of bedtime story with a cliffhanger “until tomorrow night” so to speak. But that’s most likely composer’s bias. If it doesn’t seem egregious, perhaps I’ll keep it.

@PaperComposer @Luis Hernández question for you (and anyone else) - I've got some feedback from others on the ending. So, without asking a leading question, I'm curious for your specific feedback on the ending.

Tried my best! Thanks for the feedback! It's a bit more "inspired by" than "for literal use" 🙃

Hello, This is the first of a set of short piano pieces I am writing inspired by learning how to be a parent (specifically, how my infant daughter sleeps). As this is my first post to this forum, really looking forward to hearing feedback. Thanks, David