Yoni

Hi guys, im a 17 years old composer, and as an addition to my other prelude in b major (which i apploaded some time ago) I’ve written another prelude that is named “the butterfly”. Any reviews are welcome thanks https://musescore.com/user/38164718/scores/20122765?share=copy_link

Hi, thanks for the response!! I think you made a mark both in the choice of the texture and in the expression of the cheerful part in the middle of the piece, I forgot to mark dynamics but the direction is that this part will be in poco vivace. In any case, I think the style is more towards Prokofiev

This is a much lighter part than the rest of the piece. I think it adds cheerfulness and a break from the complexity of all the beginnings and endings.

Thank you very much for the nice response! Yes, on purpose the prelude is very chromatic - the emphasis is on the movements of the left hand. I actually thought that the section between key c and modulation has nothing to do with the parts surrounding it, it seems to me that I will not change it. Still, I also wanted to finish on the dominant. Leaving an open end - I have another prelude that I haven't typed yet and it is a continuation of this prelude

Hi, im attaching my prelude, im a 17 years old composer and have been learning for about a year, reviews are appreciated https://musescore.com/user/38164718/scores/19854889

Thank you so much! I will try!

Of coursehttps://musescore.com/user/61733869/scores/10968094

Hello everyone, wrote this canon, hope you enjoy it and any advice would be appreciated