Ho Sen Ken

I recently have been working on a piano piece, can I get some feedback on the piece? I would mainly get feedback on these but other advice is appreciated: Form - is it noticible the ABA + coda form? mm189 - is it clearly notated what to do? is the rhythm diverse enough? Thank you!

Sonata in F sharp minor 11_30__2024.pdf

hello, i have recently wrote a piano piece. https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Hem5HcYmpAe7MpKJtQ6xwgeoyzW9MoVV?usp=sharing google drive has the midi file and pdf for the piece. thank you very much

Thanks for the in depth review! for the time signatures, I tried to implement that at mm. 8, 9 with the duples, although I am not sure if it is that obvious or effective. another spot is at 76, where the left hand stays in triple and right wanders in duple eventually aligning back together Yes, right hand is very much the prominent figure the entire time exept for mm. 10. However, it would be nice if you could suggest other spots that is fitting for left hand to be more prominent, as it is very easy to miss. Yes, I originally intended mm. 14 to be a further development of the main B# C# F# theme, I think the octave leap made it unclear of my intent, I have added it to the development section. thanks ken

https://musescore.com/user/40752043/scores/20268295?share=copy_link

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wQcGiEmtRW3gxqd6z4rFj6RFXktfavTT/view?usp=sharing shoot sorry here is the link.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wQcGiEmtRW3gxqd6z4rFj6RFXktfavTT/view?usp=sharing Hi, can someone give me any feedback to improve this piece? thanks