Yeah that chord i was wanting to change in bar 14. As for experimenting with rhythm I sorta kept it simple just cuz I don't really have lots of experince playing this type of music. Right now I'm learning Schoenburgs op11 so hopefully some of his ideas rub off on me. I usually write what I can play but even still I think I could've added triplets or sixteenth notes at the least to vary it. I'll see about adding more experimentation in terms of rhythm.
Hello this piece is one that I wrote which was basically a framework to develop the idea of moving away from tonality. By having this piece clearly in a minor, then the next one become more tonally ambiguous but at the end, finish it off in a minor.
Here's the midi to the score
https://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/6d7c913ce1d371fae8da86c644342048c5f206ae