Thank you guys! Your feedback is helpful
Also, for a bit of context, I am from India, so the music I have been surrounded with was the traditional Indian music (think Hindustani, Carnatic, etc.), not much of western. I believe it shows in this small piece.
I'd like some for feedback on this. For context, I do not have any music theory training, and I keep doing this as a hobby.
https://musescore.com/user/35701388/scores/23939950?share=copy_link
Untitled-139(3).mp3