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Can you clarify what you mean by “constant mixolydian C natural throughout the piece”? It goes over my head, do you mean stay in G major and go back at b.126?

Here is a (I think) better arrangement of the piece. There are no new parts but I was unsatisfied with the most recent arrangements.

Here is an extended and revised version of the piece. I’m still experimenting with having a wider variety of instruments, for now they are the same. I’m in over my head with making arrangements like this so all feedback is appreciated

I have a question about dictation. I’d like the melody that appears 25 seconds in (measure 17) to have a more “jumpy” rhythm. This is the audio of how I want it to sound. Basically some parts (like measure 19) are little quicker and come in a little earlier. Is there a way I can write this in the sheet music? Any help is appreciated.

I want the melody around 25 seconds in to the piece to have a more “jumpy” rhythm, that sounds like the audio recording below. Not sure what exactly is happening tempo wise. Any help is appreciated.

I don’t have an aversion to modulations I just don’t have much experience with them. Were there any parts you thought could use it specifically? I was thinking maybe around 1:00 and 2:45 (measures 41 and 126)

87053bd8f2cb48d184ee054407d37bb8.mp3 Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated. Please note that some of the grace notes are written like they are due to a better playback performance. Any advice on what the genre is? When it was just the first piece it was a Bagatelle, but now I’m not sure

Here is a revised and extended version of this experimental piano duet as well as the score (it ends at measure 99). All feedback is appreciated

The score goes only up to measure 36, you can disregard the rest

The score is the first 3 pages (ignore the rest). Some of the notation (like the grace notes) is written with the midi performance in mind and not how I would otherwise write it

This is about half of a new slower part of the piece. I’m not sure at the moment how to incorporate it in the piece or whether to make a separate movement. All feedback is appreciated

Idea for a piano duet. Maybe it’s better off being a synth based work but I came up with it playing the piano. It's a short idea but any impressions and feedback is appreciated. Its performed with a midi keyboard

Thanks for the tip! I’m working on a slower segment at the moment

Longer version

Here is an extended and better arranged version of the piece. Feedback on the composition and instrumentation (maybe it would be better off just using synth instruments?) is appreciated