TJ Jones

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Td9pPZojLKg Hey, I'm 17 and I made this choral piece in 2 class periods and just had its world premiere and I would love some feedback! This piece enters an aleatoric section at the end that unfolds without a conductor. It is designed to gradually evolve from independent, overlapping textures into a shared, harmonious cadence. This section represents a journey from freedom to unity, from motion to stillness, from individuality to communion. The endless cry for answers about what happens after death, until it ultimately comes to an end, so it starts chaotic and ends in unity with no conductor thoughts?