The intro really captures the exact vibe you're going for ā Iām excited to see how you continue to explore these effects.
At 1:30, the melody is spot on. I just wish it stood out a bit more and cut through the background more clearly.
Around 2:30, I felt like it might have been stronger to further develop the 1:30 melody instead of introducing a completely new one.
You used sound changes in the melody very effectively ā it adds depth and rich layering, especially when the parts overlap.