Vorannon

Oooo! Ooooo! Pick Me! I've longed for a moment like this! I mean, I'm one of those that are inspired by VGM.

The first time I saw the tuplet, I kind of understood, I was just saying that If I was trying to sight-read this, I'd hit the keys in a fit of rage when I got there. Now that you put it that way though, I think you should keep it. It would be just as difficult if I was sight-reading it without it (I'm not too good at that). Measure 50 would sound nice coming from nowhere with a ritard at the end, I like that.

I think the left hand gave a great atmosphere to the song. The sound of the right hand occupies the ear enough for both hands.

Nice. Deep piano tone that I love! short and not too complicated! Two small suggestions, though. (I'm horrible at this) - Measure 50 sounds like it's coming from nowhere. A small lead-in to the notes would fit it. (And why make it a 12tuplet or whatever? Plain 16th notes would be fine :P) - I think the last measure shouldn't be there. It ends simply on a low note and then all of the sudden: final chord. A low note finish would make a good final impression to the listner. I'll attatch the kind of thing I'm talking about. (I use Finale '06, so I put an image and an mp3)

That's wonderful. Well done. May I suggest you hold the rolls in measure 30 and 33? Such beautiful chords and they're stopped before they could be heard. I can't beleive you're my age. :)

It's a nice piece, but i'm not sure what you're going at as mentioned above. Here's some things I would do. And what software are you using? I'm curious to what boundries you're working with. - The trill at the first part sounds a bit too on beat. (this is probably just a software hold back) It would sound a bit more natural if it were ea fast triplet of some sort. - Wonderful entrance, but at about 3 seconds, there's an akwars key/tempo change that confused me for a second. I'd hold the the high note for a bit longer before continuing on. (Again, it might just be the software) - I love the part with the left hand 16th notes. Suggestion: make them stacatto for a more Baroque feel. - The last chord doesn't sound right. If this is a first movement, I can see it leading in to another song. If not, the last note could be brought up to the tonic. Other than those little things, it's a nice peice. Very Motzart feel to it.