kcoul058

up until 1:24, this is probably the best piece i've heard on here so far (probably because you took the time to make a real mp3). I'm the kind of person that only makes suggestions one at a time, because I am so confident in my suggestions (lol), that I like to hear the piece again after the suggestion is accepted before making another! (I also like it when people do the same for my pieces, since most of the time I accept their suggestions and change my piece according to them as well) So, my one and only suggestion, is to not have the broken accompaniment come in in the left hand at 1:24. You have something good in the first minute and a half, and I think you should use this point at 1:24 to make a totally or mostly different B section. Don't you agree?