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Please give comments and critism, im currently practising for my A/s Level composition and need to get used to using a smaller time schedual. Here it is.. Thanks! Song.sib song2.mid Song.pdf

Have you considered adding maybe another instrument, a violin or a cello could accompany this perfectly, Sorry for bad spelling, just woke up lol!

PhantomOftheOpera do you write a lot of lyrics, i have a voicoso ( i think its spelt like that) but i would like words in it, pm me if you can THANKS!!

I like the story line :D a jokie convosation you would have with a stranger, but looking at the piano... There seems to be a few accidentals laters which just looks odd :D i have wrote a couple of musical numbers, and likeOMWBWAY am looking to partener up maybe a 3 way thingys lol :D that could be cool. Your singing rythem seems a little off to me, Some times it dosnt seem like it would be said like that, certain sylables are held longer then they normally would be...

Sorry for double post... Roman numeral chords are easier to understand from a professional pianist, and if you are arranging this into an orchestral piece!

Umm... Eb It would be A (1st chord, if the A and B and both flat) VIIc7+4, The 7+4 would be written smaller, and im not too sure... could u re arange the chord so the F is in the bass and the G is the highest not that would make it the above chord, i don't think there is a chord for it otherwise.. Your last chord would be written as VII4+6 with teh 4+6 written smaller. I hope this helps, im not 100% sure with out seeing a score and writteing out keys and stuff lol :D Dan

This is really good, is any music accompanying her? i would like to see that.

To hear a recording of this would be great. and i would love to see it performed... its very philisophical? is that the right word? lol.. Nice quotes thought!

Hi, its a nice piece for a messing about.. i use sib its great :D 1 thing that really bothered me was that you were messing around with the theory and construction etc. yet you still wrote quavers and then a quaver rest... why not write a staccatoed crotchet??

have you got a sib file of this? I like what you have done. im not sure about the clashy seconds early in the piece

yer i see what you mean. i wanted to detach it but was not sure how far to detach it lol :D

Here is the pdf sorry for double post guys... fugato.pdf

Hey guys :D tell me what you think. i know its short, but its just a little thing i have been working on, All comments great thanks! fugato.sib fugato.mid

Very Very experimental. Thats not really my stile so i will not be able to give an unbiased review sorry. But i think its very classy from my theoretical side.

I remember using piano roll before i know theory, Piano roll should be used as a primitive form of notation, i dislike piano roll now i have grade 8 theory and i can NOT STAND graphic staves at all!! lol they drive me mad... These metods leave to much to the players interpriation... and lack basic skill.. to be a composer is to show your art to the musician... and without a unified form of showing this its not art its a doodle... to some people they can read and play it but for all people its just gibberish... the only think i can compare this to is how the evolution of electionic symbols... in the last 100 years a unified method has been created which is used today. people have there own way. but this is not understood by others :D i don't know if this helped peoples arguments here but this is my opinion :D