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Piece that i wrote that's to convey the emotions of the return of a hero, or haha the return of green through melting winter snow. The jouyous return of the seedlings

Thanks for your feedback! I tried to give the song more depth. I feel like losing the repetition of the melody in the beginning is better than having the melody bare.More comments and suggestions are welcome! :) Longed for Salvation

Have not contributed to this forum in a while. I have been visiting and listening but I hadn't made anything. Today I felt it was time,,, so i made a song maybe for a dungeon or a town environment. VIII

i agree it does have the sound of a nice rap song,,,:)

WOW,,I really enjoyed this! I love yoko shimomura and i think that your improvement on this piece was amazing. changes in tempo are perfect!

Thanks for your great feedback! I will definitely take it into account while I improve this piece and in the future!

I think that it does an ok job being a town theme or dungeon theme. I tried to improve over previous things i've done and take into account what people here have helped me to see, so i hope it sounds ok. simple plan.mus simple plan.mid simple plan.pdf

I agree with derekrazo, although this is a very nice piece, it is not powerful enough. but i still like it YAY!

I made this for fun, but i was wondering how could i make the connections between the "chorus" and the "verses" more interesting,,,any suggestions? game.mus game.mid game.pdf

@reth "maybe you have been playing too much wii XD i think maybe a brass would do nicely,,,

I really like this, it really reminds me of hamauzu for some reason. I think it is a good final battle music.

Thank you for the feedback,,, you said some things that i definitely did not know. I will wake all of this into consideration and i hope that this piece can come out better!

Man,,, not only am i not too sire on how this really sounds to other people, but now i have no clue what to do with it. Can someone give me some suggestions, please. ggg.pdf ggg.mid ggg.mus

I like this, its very smooth and calming. Its like the music after the climax of a movie, or after a resolution has been made.

After some advice from another YC forum member, i composed this, but i think is need a lot of feedback because i don't think its so great. haha but i hope its somewhat enjoyable.:toothygrin: dreamsilk.mus dreamsilk.pdf