Marius: Thanks for your comments regarding my sketch.
To defend it a bit... haha... it actually was intended for a Western romantic comedy. The main female lead is Indian, but she is culturally very much American.
As far as a lack of sophistication... you are quite right that I don't develop the ideas. This is mostly because I only spent a few hours on it and submitted it to the director. I wish I had more stuff to put on my website, but since I've only been a "film composer" for a few months, I don't have a lot of material to put up there.
Maybe I will go back and rework it to make it more interesting.