Jakks

Hi all! This is my first submission to the forum. I gave some feedback first, as I've seen that it's encouraged. This is a piece I did a couple of years ago. Completely done in Ableton Live. The production is fairly terrible. Lots of noise and bad levels, but I really enjoy the composition. Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks! -Seth Watership Down

Truly very creepy! The voice gave some real credibility to the opening strings. After the opening section broke, though, the piece holds its own extremely well! I love the march of the stacc. low string section. The return of the voice really brings you to a place of security. I would try to smooth out a couple of the more jarring movements and the introductions of the choir, though. The piano line and ambient noises following are really nice. The very end, however, was a bit too happy for me :P I would've like to have it end in uncertainty. Overall, really nice job! Be proud of this one :)

Just listened to Adagio, since it seems to be the track of choice. Wow!! Really excellent mood! A familiar one, but you brought something fresh to it. This piece really tore at my emotions. What are you writing these for? Fun? A specific project?

Hi there! I liked the mood of this piece a lot. The only thing I didn't like very much: the high flutes. They reminded me of cheesy movie scores from my childhood. Could, of course, be the patch you're using. Everything else, though, was absolutely brilliant! I'm curious to know what you used for the low strings here. They sounded very good. Nice job!