Zemus1
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Best composition I have heard from these forums.
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Interesting. During 5-6 minute mark, this seems uncharacteristic of the piece. If this is in Sonata form, I am having trouble finding your two tonal areas and general structure. I like your use of orchestration at times and the interplay is fine with the piano. Fun to listen to. Really good work.
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Not bad for lack of training. This sounds like it would work well for a rock group!
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I would have liked to hear something different in the left hand, or maybe a contrasting section with some mode mixture. Otherwise, it is indeed simple and relaxing.
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I found it enjoyable. Did you compose this for any reason in particular? It seems like it would be fitting for some sort of event.
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Very dramatic. I agree with adding some fluff. The piece progresses quickly. Cool.
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Interesting. Maybe expand the contrasting section a bit.
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Hello, this is a short sonata I wrote as a gift. It is four movements. 1. Techniques used It is classical in structure. It makes use of tonal harmony. 2. How long it took to compose the piece About a week. 3. Structure of your piece Movement 1= Sonata form Movement 2= Binary with a little rounding Movement 3= Compound binary Movement 4= Variations 4. Obstacles when composing Lack of experience with composing classical works. Time constraints. 5. Summary of overall piece It is what it is. BSonataMVMT1Allegro.mid BSonataMVMT2Andante.mid BMVMT3.mid BSonataMVMT4Variations.mid