Treyton5789

reminds me of tenacious d hahaha

thanks for the help, ill mess with it and see what i can do. Thanks again, i'm always looking for opinions

I'd also accept a critique, that would be great. And I'm good on the hug, by the way. I'm not quite finished and was hoping for some feedback on what I already have, thank you

it doesn't flow well and the chorus is too repetitious :/ sorry

For every lie you fabricate My decision is oh so clear For your deception is a ruse An act of forlorn fear So, bury my expectations And blight my one addiction Your life is concocted divinity Forever forging fiction You put an end to vindication There

i intended to put it to something but havent had the time, thanks for commenting everyone and sorry about tittle, my attempt at comedy and getting people to take a look haha

Intro Verse: You know that we would never count you out Everyone is here for you; don’t ever have a doubt We know you’ll make it all the way, and never see the day That we say goodbye Verse: Every time was always different but all is fading to the same We are young, we are restless, but all of that will change Every antic we adhered to would be another memory Of the times we were together, these moments are forever Chorus: Back when everything was fine It’s where it all went down Without a care or worry We were always side-by-side For all it’s worth, it means everything Verse: The times we will share, were losing every minute So lets value every moment and take it all to heart You know it’s all that we got, and all we ever will So keep us all in mind, and never let go Verse: It’s hard seeing less of one another, but Straining our friendship makes us all so much stronger Where has the time gone, it’s slipping through our fingers Missing out on what we miss, and what we strive to find in all of this

Verse: I have nothing left of me to mend I feel perfect the way I am With no need for me to pretend I

That starry night we grew so fondly of Watching the heavens beautiful canvas Dampened grass and chilling winds Allocated by seductive grins I moved my hand down your arm And baby, come closer so you

INTRO VERSE: Sleepless as we are, and anxious to adore But I slept last night of us, and you showed up at my door And we drove out to the lake that night, and took each others hand And walked along the darkened beach, stumbling in the sand PRELUDE: And I