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Here it is Strings.mid

This is a short piece i wrote when i was in the mood to write something different. Dont remember how i got started on the melody but it turned out good in my ears. I was thinking this would sound good in some type of Native american movie or exploring the deep woods or traveling down rivers. How do you think it turned out. Native.mid

I forgot to attach the song Strings.mid

I Have been working on and off on this piece for about a month. It ends pretty sudden i dont know where i should go from there but i think it sounds alright how it is now. If you have some time i would appreciate Feedback on it. Also i would like to know what it makes you thinkabout or what i makes you feel like. I know its too short to really have any powerful emotion in it.

To tell you the truth it was pretty bad. i wouldnt stop composing though. Everyone has to start somewhere. When i first starting composing i thought they were all masterpieces now i look back at them and laugh. i dont know what i was thinking. I would research music theory or if your still in school take a class on it. Theres alot of notes that sound really out of place. At about 1:00 theres that really annoying thing that is horrible. if that wasnt there it would be a little better. Were you using any particuilar scale in this if so could you tell me? BLINK

I agree it doesnt sound too much like a battle fight song. I think it would fit better as a song played with the credits or the intro to the game. Dont care for the percussion but its in midi so what can you really expect. But overall i found it alright. i'll look forward to hearing more from you

There was nothing i hated about it but there was nothing to make me think it was great. but thats ok i still found it rather good. dont really like the sudden drop of musical instuments thoughtout the song like at 2:15. Mabye you could add something to make the transition a little less Sudden.

Its in another topic but i'll post it in here i would appreciate any type of feedback http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/6/10/600...20to%20Life.mp3

I wrote this piece about a month ago. It took me about a day to write This is one of my first more orchestrated pieces. Just wondering if i should just stop here or go on to make more. Click on link Below to hear http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/6/10/600...The%20World.mp3

I posted earlier but it didnt work so i did it this way I made this compostion in about an hour so it might sound a little rushed. I wrote it out on my guitar then use fruity loops and made the song ***Copy and paste the whole link below to your web browser*** http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/6/10/600...20to%20Life.mp3 it may take a while to Load Sorry :(

Hey, Wrote a new song composition today i just wanted to get some feedback on it.