Mary Jackson

The next one will be better, then, definitely. Thank you for the comments. I listen to the song after I read them and can really hear what you mean. There's always more songs to compose, even better than this one.

This is an experimental work. I am not sure about style, technique, or anything, but it took me a really long time to write. Hours into a night or two after I had written the melody. It is in four parts with treble clef, alto, and two bass. Please let me know how I could improve Mozart8.mid

You're probably right. Thank you for the advice. "Play us a song. You're the piano man."

Well, thanks. That' spretty much the basics, which I could still improve tremedously on. I'm glad it sounds like and old video game, because that's exactly what I was shooting for. I want to compose for video games when I get out of school. Anything else? Should I improve my transitions or anything or is it fine so far, or is it even a peice worth publishing when it's done?

big 74 harp.sibI haven't even finished the peice. It's the first one for me, other than scrapping up a peice that no one else can read. I'm stuck and don't know where to go! Please tell me how to improve.Yellow_Effect.mid