J.W.Mark
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It works. I think you did a good job, cheers.
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The insturmental aspect of this piece is doing fine. It's in a style that people are familiar with and can relate to. The singing I have a small quam with, it sounds like Marvin the Martian at times. I like the "talk singing" that death will do every once in a while--that works well, I feel. Try to keep your tounge out of the back of your throat and you might surprize yourself with what you can do with your voice. Ciao dude.
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The two melodies in this piece seem to not agree on where they want to go. Nice concept though.
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None taken, thanks for your reply. By the by, did you happen to listen to the songs listed at the bottom of the page?
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My SoundClick Everything with a dragon picture in front would apply with this topic, though you're welcome to listen to the others of course. The first few are thirty second demos, so if you're interested in full pieces, they can be found at the bottom. I'm just looking for some general feelings and opinions about the work. Thanks guys!