it does have that far eastern feeling, especially the begining. i really like the idea of having triplets against quarters. but it gets a bit repetive. i would take the triplets out in the middle and add more energy with a more active piano part but then end with it.
this is my first post so if i did anything wrong please tell me. this is a revised string trio. my second composition and first using instruments (other than voice). please tell me what you think. any kind of criticism is welcome. thanks.
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