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this the latest version Nirvana Inspired Song.mid

thanx for review can you brush it up and send it to me at bbenman5@gmail.com

Ive been listening to a lot of nirvana lately and this is my song i came up wiht the inspiration of there dead notes its kinda grunge Nirvana Inspired Song.mid

um post this here UG Community @ Ultimate-Guitar.Com - Songwriting & Lyrics

sure whats your aim mines guitarelitist

lyrics what type of song

yeah me and my friend are working on a progdeath song heres the intro trans and verse UG Community @ Ultimate-Guitar.Com - Were Not Close To DOne

probably cant do it but ill try

This is a metal song i came up with i think its pretty rock -gp5 RapidShare: Easy Filehosting -midi RapidShare: Easy Filehosting

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This is a really good intro and transition to verse just check it out http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=51e990f217eef97aab1eab3e9fa335cacfacd0bb3768bf49

really funky this is awesome

This is my newest song there will be some interuptions(my brothers were making water balloons) Please rate it 1-10 Free File Hosting Made Simple - MediaFire click i am hell final

http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=51e990f217eef97ad2db6fb9a8902bda This is a power metal composition its kinda alternative also its all in acoustic im gonna record it with all the types of instuments eventually heres the lyrics Intro Distortion Intro Chords Intro NOtes Verse 1 Warriors on black stallions marching toward the end fire breathing dragons protecting their nests theirs that lonely soldier waiting to be killed but what he found instead was some thign so precious it made the world spin so lets go yah Chorus Raging fires from the highest mountains pouring darkness into the worlds fountains the end has came to soon Excalibur has been possessed Verse 2 that lonely soldier became a mighty king he ruled the lands before with an iron fist he then decided to appoint a wizard named Merlin who sent him on a mighty quest to find a holy grail that made the world spin Chorus Raging fires from the highest mountains pouring darkness into the worlds fountains the end has came to soon Excalibur has been possessed Solo should go here when i come up with ti Chorus Raging fires from the highest mountains pouring darkness into the worlds fountains the end has came to soon Excalibur has been possessed Concluding Verse Now you've learned what power does a lonely soldier becomes a mighty king so don't find the end or you will be brought to spin the world

Running Out of Control Intro Lyrics Running Out of Control Intro Intro Lyric after intro Are We Ready? Yes we are yes we are yes we are and were gonna go far Where we going? All the way all the way all the way yeah..... verse 1 Running down running down a hill at the speed of light dont wana get caught and get in a fight hanging out hanging out with my friends were gonna get crazy and break the bends Living long living long all the time do what we want as long as it mimes Chorus We got the might we got the strength we got the fire were ready to light it ch ch ch ch ch chchcch were ready to fight it ch ch ch ch chg chchch were ready knife him ch ch ch ch chg chchch if he hurts us again Were not scared were not scared we got a team here and we wont be scared(not scared scared) No more dents no more dents were a fortified wall and were ready to pay the rent no more fires no more fear were just starting up the gear Chorus We got the might we got the strength we got the fire were ready to light it ch ch ch ch ch chchcch were ready to fight it ch ch ch ch chg chchch were ready knife him ch ch ch ch chg chchch if he hurts us again Are We Ready? Yes we are by the time were done were gonna go so far Outro gonna go far Running Left.mid

Wrath of the Gods is almost complete. Click on link to check it out. After this im working on power metal song. Check out solo and if you like it ask for more. this is really sloppy but its a full rugh draft need to fill in drums and base and rythm http://www.uploading.com/files/WLLQLMFV/Wrath_of_THe_Gods_Full.mid.html

yeah i really like it its really good but the lyrics um let me say arn't very good id class it in slow rock

metal lol tthsi is so far from metal this isnt even power maybe symphonic black metal if it was faster but u need to make this not soujnd classica;l i see alot of classical influence if youw ant to make this metal destroy it with a metal hammer magazine and what abnds you in to so i can have an idea of wabht your trying to do

wtf this must be perfect because no ones dsaying anything or anything bad

Thant prob because classical is what's pop on this forum and knowbody wants to listen to a doom metal piece

why isnt anybody comenting

this is my first ever full song with a solo and everything tell me what you think of it EDIT MADE A MISTAKE now i have to re upload it Download fdg.wma free - Uploading.com

first is Wrath of The Gods Wrath of The Gods Verse 1: Dying at the hand of the next god i see the world go boom and done crying on the statue of the gods ill see you dying here because this is the wrath of the gods Chorus: This is the wrath, wrath of the gods This is the wrath, wrath of the gods this is the wrath, wrath of the gods Verse 2: burning statues falling on remains of your forgotten corpse i see the ambrosia gardens dye and wither away because this is the wrath of the gods Chorus: This is the wrath, wrath of the gods This is the wrath, wrath of the gods this is the wrath, wrath of the gods solo Bridge: and the end hasn't come so soon heavy metal is still gonna make the pops darkness is there to rock we have been solidated seditated excavated reactivated drum solo Outro: this is the wrath of the gods this is the wrath of the gods this is the wrath of the gods then the second one Doomsday Is Still Smiling Verse 1: A rabid but a simple song i am pessimistic in every way darkness is taking over and i fell like killing myself every day i weep in sorrow as the bell will toll again and now i feel your pain becuase im not in this world anymore, anymore anymore Chorus: doomsday will never smile again doomsday will never lie to me again doomsday has a smile on its face maybe were not gonna die today doomsday will never smile again doomsday will never lie to me again doomsday has a smile on its face maybe were not gonna die today Verse 2: i am dying with the hopes of life to be gone so far behind i am felling all the pain Ive dealt and knowing that its time to and be left alone for all eternity my happy life is gone forever and just wont reappear and now i say my good byes because i am gonna die, gonna die, gonna die Chorus: doomsday will never smile again doomsday will never lie to me again doomsday has a smile on its face maybe were not gonna die today Verse 3: y2k was just a game the darkness has come for real i am being buried at the moment by know one that you'd know i am seeing life that i once had and what i once have blown and now i feel the death fever coming on coming on coming on Chorus: doomsday will never smile again doomsday will never lie to me again doomsday has a smile on its face maybe were not gonna die today solo Outro: and its doomsday i say

nm so horibly poppy reduce popiness or my ears are gonna bleed