July 25, 200718 yr I'm not exactly sure what to do with the end of this peice (around after the trumpets and cornets come in). I think I am going to make more movements for it but I want to finnish this first. If someone could please give me tips, that would be great. dances.MUS
July 29, 200718 yr What you have written so far seems to be a fanfare or introduction to what you are going to write next. My comment on what you have written is that there is a lot of repetition between parts that are themselves quite repetitive - I suggest you either eliminate some instruments that have the most repetitive lines so that those which move and carry the melody stand out more, or double up on the melodic parts instead of the repetitive ones. So I don't think it needs to have more of an ending - what is needed is more of the piece (but not more fanfare) :).
July 29, 200718 yr Author ok. Thanks for your help! I've only taken 1 year of music theory so far so I dont know alot yet but I signed up music theoryII.
