A Little Piece

:cool: opinions please this is my 3 composition

stef4.mid

please i need opinions someone help please

What do you want the piece to become?

It's a nice piece, but i'm not sure what you're going at as mentioned above. Here's some things I would do. And what software are you using? I'm curious to what boundries you're working with.

- The trill at the first part sounds a bit too on beat. (this is probably just a software hold back) It would sound a bit more natural if it were ea fast triplet of some sort.

- Wonderful entrance, but at about 3 seconds, there's an akwars key/tempo change that confused me for a second. I'd hold the the high note for a bit longer before continuing on. (Again, it might just be the software)

- I love the part with the left hand 16th notes. Suggestion: make them stacatto for a more Baroque feel.

- The last chord doesn't sound right. If this is a first movement, I can see it leading in to another song. If not, the last note could be brought up to the tonic.

Other than those little things, it's a nice peice. Very Motzart feel to it.

thankyou very much for your reply´s the software im using is guitar pro 4 could anyone recomend me a better software please, i would work on the tips you said thankyou very very much

Wow, Finale intepreted that MIDI file weird! It had about four measures a note for the beginning.

Overall, you have interesting ideas, but you're lacking coherence. Your harmonies often proceed in very awkward directions. Here's what I'd recommend, as it's how I got started writing for piano (and how I prefer to write): write at the piano! Don't just sit down at your computer in front of the blank screen and pick out notes. My sympathies if you don't have access to one, but if you do, you'll find you'll get better results that way. If you need better software, Finale and Sibelius are excellent choices, and Finale has a free-though-very-limited version called Notepad. Go to www.codamusic.com/notepad if you want to get it.