August 17, 200718 yr Hello! This simple piano & strings piece is composed in year 2006. inspired by my mother and her fight against cancer. HIFI: Doll dearest HI-FI D/L: Doll Dearest D/L Thanks for any comment!
August 17, 200718 yr Lovely. Welcome to YC. This is a great first piece to show your talent. You have employed great dynamics in this and I love the cello. Are you planing on continuing this, as the ending seemed a bit abrupt? Regardless, this is a perfect way to introduce yourself here. Be patient and comments will come. It also helps to comment on other peoples works and they will return the favor.
August 17, 200718 yr Marvelous work! Your development is very strong. And I also like the way you orchestrate with the fast string rythm to accompany the piano melody. Very emotional:)
August 19, 200718 yr hi there! i have to admit...this is only the second piece ive heard on this site that has almost brought a tear to my eye :laugh: haha. i did feel it lost a littly bit of luster in the middle section, but that bit of advice is so minor i wouldnt worry about it lol. i do agree with rolifer in the abrupt ending, maybe thats what you were going for. the strings did highlight the piece nicely. welcome to YC and i hope there is more wonderful music in that brain of yours :angry::D
August 19, 200718 yr Nice, simple, and beautiful...its repetitive nature worked fine for me, but I feel it could have used some more...exploration! Less soundscape-esque [sic] and more composition-esque. Either way, this is a great start! Consider posting scores from now on for fuller reviews. Welcome.
