MINI SYMPHONY NO 1

hi

this is the work for express myself

and this work is quite long but i think ... this music is very serious for express my feeling

so there are many themes on this work ,.,,, but i want to link up all of them .. and also i want a clear harmony for this piece to make the main part of melody focus of what they should to focus on

a.MID

With a bit of MIDI imagination I would have to say great job! The work as a whole has a dark undertone and seems to be very rhythmically driven. Your transitions sound fluid and clearly thought out for all your thematic ideas. Great use of all the orchestral colors and ranges. Also, good use of dissonance in the larger chordal areas.

Michael

thank u ,,,,, for your advice

Very Very dissonant. It should be part of an uneasy background sound for a game in a tense situation. I suggest you to modify some parts to release the tension by using tonal harmony. Keep composing, that is how you will get better.

thank u