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This is a peice I wrote, and all my friends that have heard it say it is really good. I would appreciate any suggestions to make it better. I would also appreciate suggestions for a title.

Thank you

Where's the piece?

I must have forgotten to put it on. Sorry about that. My computer is being weird, I'll put it on sometime later.

Here is the song. Sorry about that.5b.MUS

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Please tell me what you think about this peice. Thank you.

intersting, nice overall mood. but i think that it is much the same throughout. at the beginning, because the way u introduces the harp, i expected it would be a ground for strings with solo for harp, but then the harp soon falls into the same rhythm of the strings, and it is a bit frustrating. you have created a noble and elevated mood but i feel missing a real solo above this fine texture. you could make more clearly divided sections and then make the harp really sing, opening its wings and flying up with the force coming from the strings, i think that u could make a very fine somewhat concertant piece with this very good material.

regards!

Thank you for your comment. I agree with you about the harp solo. My laziness got in the way and I created a lot of repetition. Any other comments would be welcomed.