My First Attempt.

actually never mind.. i thought I converted the file right but I guess not.. can't upload it :(

-Smartyy!

(you can delete this post now :P)

Never mind the Never-minded :P I got it working now.. here 'tis, the first minute and a half or so.

Basically I got my idea figured out, after the Oboe does it's thing, a snare drum is gonna come in real quiet, then a clarinet will do it's thing, then horn or something, i don't know, but eventually the whole orchestra will play together.

please critique it in any way possible

(and the first two notes of the Oboe is switched, but it's late and i'm too tired to fix it right now)

-smartyy!

P.S. two things: 1, don't try to play the "concerto for Bassoon.mid" it's not a real MIDI file, and 2. the name "Bassoon English Horn Quartet Song" isn't the real name of the song, but at the time i was going to do a queartet consisting of those four things.. (and I spelled Bassoon wrong :P)

thanks!

Concerto for Bassoon.mid

Basson English Horn Quartet Song.mid

Well...I kind of liked the first part of the piece--the melody was cool--but the end was extremely dull and LONG!

But great job on the melody part...I would consider adding more to the piece and incorporating some more layers.

wow i didn't think anybody would reply to this lol.

Yeah It is very boring. I added a contra since I last updated this thread, it has a lot of 'solos' in the first 30 measures or so to make the four bassoons not sound so repetetive.

I sorta gave up on that piece though, I wrote a new one, which I am still tweaking, it can be found at the "Avante-Garde/Electronica" section. It's called "Urban NIght"

Thanks for the comment though!

-Smartyy!

Could you by chance upload this to a file hosting site? I can't seem to open the files as is