A song for piano

This is the first song I have ever written for piano. It changes key, time, and tempo several times throughout the song. I would love to hear what you have to say about it. I also am needing a title for this peice, as I can never think of titles for my music.

Crimson_Flight.MUS

Untitled.MID

cool!!!!!! very fine piece! its lovely mood captures the attention of the listener from the very beginning and hold it till the end - very intersting and enjoyable composition, with most delicate hues and subtle and meaningful variations of textures and dynamics, and very wise and effective modulations. just between 2:50 and 3:10 i think it is a bit random and "common", but just a little. congrats!

From the start it sounds like a nice, attractive piece. I especially liked the progression around 1:50 that brought back the melody. Sometimes your tempo changes seem somewhat random to me (specifically around 1:35). Perhaps you should try working your way into them slowly? The ending was very enigmatic, but I don't think you ever really had a climax in the piece. If there was one, I'd say it was around 2:00, and that's way too early. I kept expecting another huge section, but there wasn't one, and that irked me a bit. Also, I don't think you made good enought use of the lower half of the piano (my opinion). I really like the deep sounds of the piano.

As for a name, you should try something really vague, so that no matter what, it fits the song :blink:. Something like "Remembrance" or "Air". Then you just translate that to Italian, German, or French for an exotic texture :laugh:.

Hope this helps,

Evan

Thank you. I really appreciate the comments.