March 4, 200917 yr That was nice and relaxing. I think it felt a bit repetitive at times. Does it have lyrics by any chance? I imagined the melody being sung when I heard this for some reason. One little penalizing...the cymbol roll at the very end of the song was too loud
March 4, 200917 yr Author I meant it to have a very lyrical sound to it. But, no, it doesn't have lyrics. Mainly because A: I don't sing, and B: I'm really not very good with words, lol. Yeah, I know what you mean about the cymbal roll at the end. I'd like it to sound more realistic, but for now I have to go with the sounds I have on the keyboard.
August 31, 200917 yr Author Ok, guys... here's the thing. This has always been one of my favorite pop 'songs' that I've written, but the more I listen to it as time goes by, the more I realise (at least in my mind) that it sounds too much like "My Heart Will Go On". I don't want to completely re-write it, per say, but I want to tweak it some, to make it more original. I was wondering if anyone had any tips on how to go about doing that.
