Finished allegro c minor with score

Piano sonata No.1, c-minor, 1st movement, Allegro

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Hallo friends,

I have just finished the allegro in c-minor for piano, I would like to share with you. Actually its the 1st movement of my 1st piano sonata c-minor.

The first 90 seconds should be played allegro and the rest 3 minutes presto with ritardando and accelerando to change tempo like in the mp3 file.

I appreciate every comment, its always an important feedback and motivation for me to know if you enjoy it or not. So what do you say?

MP3 file here:

c-minor-final.mp3

c-minor-final.mp3 - File Download

c-minor-final.mp3 - File Download

allegro_c_minor_final.pdf

This is actually very nice, I quite like it :)

It does seem a bit busy at times, but that might just be the recording and performance rather than the music itself. This is beyond me to critique really, good job :)

Thank you! I think this is the best piece I have written so far.

I just started on the continuation of Allegro, which is actually the 1st movement of the Sonata c-minor.

Here are my first steps on the 2nd movement called largo:

MP3

part2.mp3

Sheet

cmol-part2-largo.pdf

Of course its unfinished, but your opinion is welcome.

I think the opening (which is the only bit my computer wants to load!) is touching, although I think you could (and should) turn the circle of fifth sequence into a melodic sequence, rather than simply a series of scales. The harmony's there, but a tune or embellishment is required.

I'll post more when I can actually hear the rest!

Thanks for having a look on the unfinished 2nd movement (Largo).

Im missing feedback on the finished 1st movement Allegro, feel free to comment!

I'll post more when I can actually hear the rest!

I have finished the 2nd movement yesterday, I hope you can now hear it. You can find it as a new thread.