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hello everyone...i'm new here...i make songs... i'm not much of a composer or a musician, so i came here hoping to grow. this is a song i made...maybe i could get some feedback and syuff

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That was cool, I really liked it. It has a very 60's vibe going on between the guitar and drums and I really liked the synth stuff thrown in at the end. The only that bothered me were the strings about a minute into the song. The minor to major thing was a little happy for me and I felt they didn't really fit the song. I think it could work a lot better if they were a little more rhythmic and maybe have a little ornamentation. Anyway its a really cool song! What did you use to write it?

That was cool, I really liked it. It has a very 60's vibe going on between the guitar and drums and I really liked the synth stuff thrown in at the end. The only that bothered me were the strings about a minute into the song. The minor to major thing was a little happy for me and I felt they didn't really fit the song. I think it could work a lot better if they were a little more rhythmic and maybe have a little ornamentation. Anyway its a really cool song! What did you use to write it?

yeah wow cool! i was trying to summon some kinda 60's feel so thats cool that thats what it sounded like to you too..and those strings are a weird part of the song too ...i kind feel like they are some kind of disco feeling thrown in there..they are happy, but i don't really know how to get a wide variety of sounds and nuance yet, so they are sort of the evidence of my skill level. but i used GPO and Vienna Cello for the strings and the guitar is just some guitar and the drums are chopped from strawberry fields takes and i think some toms from chopped from Cream...oh yeah and the synth at the end is really guitar with some effects... thanks for listening...oh yeah i use Acid hahah Sony Acid i mean

are you from texas? :)

i liked this one as well, good works, johovian, bluesy funky, and nice movements