May 13, 200818 yr A composition for solo piano in 7/8. It's not meant to be a deadly serious composition (as you can tell from the title), but it is meant to convey a sense of joy. So, does it do that? It is a work in progress - so no dynamics or detail as yet. Also some bars could do with tweaking, possibly a section which contrasts. Just looking for some general comments as to how you think it looks at the moment. =] carefree.mid carefree.pdf
May 13, 200818 yr Yes I think it does, its a pretty little piece. I like the change of melody at around 20 seconds :) Also I really enjoyed the ending Lex
May 13, 200818 yr Author Thanks for such a speedy reply, Lex. Could you (or anyone really) identify places where it was not "pretty"? I really want to get it as polished as possible, and before I start refining it myself I would like to know what others feel could be improved upon. A =] is in order: =]
May 15, 200818 yr It's good, I personally think the theme in 4/4 that starts at 45 sounds a bit "empty", though I don't know if adding anything would make it better. Second thought, leave it as it is. It's really fun to listen to.
