An Unfinished Quartet

Hello everyone! I've had this piece on the back burner lately, but would like to finish it. So I decided to enlist the big brains at YC!

What should be added/taken away, and where it should go?

It's just a rough draft, so no markings/dynamics yet.

Thanks for looking, and I must say that I'm absolutely loving this site!:thumbsup:

this was really good so far :)

only thing i may suggest is giving the cello more of a melody as opposed to a support role later on in the piece.

May i ask which software you used for the sound file?

ferret,

hey there!

I love the quartet so far! I would say give the second violin and viola a bit more exposure, especially in the beginning. I like how it's solo violin and cello, but I think it goes on that way for a bit too long.

Other then that, I really liked it. Make it longer! :)