First composition ever

Hey,

My first musical thing I created. I still need to add an ending and do something with harmony, but I wanted to show it to you anyway. I had the idea about adding some guitar/drum rocky thing at the end but not sure how I'm going to do that :whistling:.

Please tell me what you think about it so far and how I can improve it. My theory knowledge is limited so critique and tips are very appriciated :).

Greetings

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I can't give you any help because I probably know less than you.

I listened to it first using Realplayer and it wasn't very good because the viola overwhelmed everything else.

I loaded it into Melody Assistent and adjusted the volumes and it was much better with everything playing closer to the same volumn level.

Other than that I have no suggestions. It sounded ok to me. Nothing to write home about, but I see nothing wrong with it either. Like you said, it's not finished yet.

It sounds ok to me. ;)